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Shes the girl who talks to her reflection in the broken glass of her mirror,
Hes the boy who carves his songs into the underside of his wrist.
They call her crazy, and they call him a mess.
They couldn't be more wrong.
She dances with the butterflies as he sings with the lightning bugs.
They have only met in their dream worlds.
Led by their winged friends, they meet in a clearing.
The moonlight reflects from her golden hair into his bright green eyes.
Her heart pounds as he steps closer.
He is drawn to her as if by some magnetic force.
No words have to be spoken as they gaze into enlightened eyes.
The second they saw each other,
They knew.
She was his missing piece,
He was her other half.

If only their dreams could be their reality.
thought i would write something in a different view for once ^^
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fangedfallenrose Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
I loved it.
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010
aw thanks Dear :D
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Believerofnothing Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010
I like this.. I hope you can find someone to share your dreams with. Someone to share your life with.
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010
hopefully. and i wish the same to you, if you havent already found that someone

(:
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Believerofnothing Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
Still trying...nobody really catches my eye at the moment. but thanks! :D
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In-the-Dark11 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
lol i just wrote one recently Boy meets Girl :P lol i liked it!
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
did you? XD well, i almost named it that. because that seems to ne how that always works, but i decided to be different, which is good, seeing as you wrote Boy Meets Girl. XD


and thanks for the fave!!
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In-the-Dark11 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
np XD heehee i just found it odd.
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
yeah, it is rather odd. lol. i need to catch up n my reading, i dont think ive even read yours yet. D:
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In-the-Dark11 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
It's fine :P hehe
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
hehe :P okayyyy XD
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In-the-Dark11 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:P
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
hmm can you get on yahoo, or are you busy?
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zackBlack16 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
i love it! almost sounds like it might make a great song even lol
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
hehe thanks! im glad you like it. but im no good at writing songs. XD random poetry in the middle of the night is more my thing.

and thanks for the fave!! :D
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zackBlack16 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2009
lol what do you think songs are? its poetry lol it would take some editing but i think it would make a good song realy

no prob :P
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2009
well i know songs are poetry to music, but still. they are usually written with a certain rhythem. it sounds like a run-on sentence when i try to make it sound like a song. haha

:P
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zackBlack16 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2009
meh, it could be done :P
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
:P it could, probably not by me though XD
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zackBlack16 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
lol well one day if i ever get good at writing songs ill come back and ask to do it XD
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WonderfullyBroken Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
hehe. XD i could ask my friend allison to see if she could do something with it, she writes music a lot.
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